Today Jessica, Leaaepeni and I, created a new version of the New Zealand nationa lanthem as part of our learning. We had to clarify and change some of the words like 'nations' and 'entreat' to 'countries' and 'please'. I have to admit that Jessica rewrote most of the sentences but I still helped.
If you've read our version of the national anthem tell me what you think about it.
2 comments:
Kia ora Tristan, my name is Georgia from Parkview Parua school. I really like your new version of the national anthem! It was quite creative and I enjoyed reading it. Why did you decide to make a new version of the national anthem? How long did it take to think of all the new words? Good job! :)
Hi Georgia, thank you for the compliments I really appreciate it. First of all I had some help from my partner Jessica, and it wasn't me who came up with the idea, it was an assignment from my teacher. It took me and my partner about half an hour to create the new version, because we had to learn the definition of all the english words and find the most suitable words to replace them. Thank you for your generous comment.
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