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Thursday, 23 June 2016

My Persuasive Writing



The Michael Jordan Red And Black Nikes

You need to buy these shoes because they're what you’ve dreamed of. They are the most comfortable shoes in the world. They glow at night and they are indestructible. There are three buttons on the side of it, one button makes your feet warm, the other massages your feet and the last button makes you fly. It’s only $40 dollars!!! Get in quick or else they're all gone!!!

We learned how to persuade people to buy our product by creating an advert. I wrote about a pair of shoes that have three special buttons. My teacher said she was convinced and wanted to buy my shoes. Mission complete!

2 comments:

Alexandra said...

Malolo Lai Tristan you did a good job at writing about
Michael Jordan Red And Black Nikes also i think you would dream about getting them good luck writing about shoes.

Alexandra said...

Malolo Lai Tristan you did a good job at writing about
Michael Jordan Red And Black Nikes also i think you would dream about getting them good luck writing about shoes.

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