Tuesday, 1 November 2016

My Creative Comment

Talofa Lava, this is a comment that I have wrote. This is also what we have been learning in cyber smart with Mrs Grant. When Mrs Grant checked this comment she said that it was perfect and specific, she even said that she didn't have to change anything. I was very proud of me. How would you feel ?

1 comment:

Jen&Chris said...

Hi Tristan!

We wish we could write a comment like yours! Ms. Grant is absolutely right - it's an amazing comment, and you should be very proud of yourself. If we were ever able to write like you, we'd probably feel very happy and excited!

Keep up the amazing work! We love reading your blog!

~Jennifer And Christina

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